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I need to write a country song, and it needs to start with "Take a picture of my broken heart"


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From a country song generator:

In buttsburgh, when I was a child
I met a hygienic man
"How can you be so hygienic?" asked I
Here was his wise reply

Don't live your life like a bunghole
Today might feel a time to be like a bunghole
But that ain't no way to lead a life

Met an old lady who lived like a bunghole
"What happened to her?" asked I
Here was his wise reprise

Don't live your life like a bunghole
Today might feel a time to be like a bunghole
But that ain't no way to lead a life

That lady's gone now
It's sad really
Word is, she had hairy hair once

Little sandy, keep your jeans red
Always stay hygienic, sandy
Always stay hygienic

 

https://www.song-lyrics-generator.org.uk/country/

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A country song needs to be:

1) Focused on a simple emotion: an achy breaky heart, don't take your love to town, etc.

2) it has to have a good "hook:" a catchy phrase. In my opinion, the best one of all time is: "Your cheatin' heart will tell on you."

"Take a picture of my broken heart" dictates the song has to be focused on lost love.  The hook should probably be about something the picture shows like: a missing piece or can't be mended or damaged instead of made good by Cupid's arrow, etc."

There's your outline.

I'd spend more time,

But I can't rhyme.

 

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